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06-18-2007, 01:46 PM
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Vary beautifull though im not normaly into this stuff (i dont know what to call it) it kinda touches you in the heart
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Sorry, Alllie may have pretty low standards, but no amount of false flattery will get her to touch a mongoloid, in the heart or anywhere else.
Also, whatever did happen to that Dannyboy?
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06-18-2007, 01:56 PM
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Sorry, Alllie may have pretty low standards, but no amount of false flattery will get her to touch a mongoloid, in the heart or anywhere else.
Also, whatever did happen to that Dannyboy?
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Well it was alot better then your vershon...
and also he died thats why the pipes are playing
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06-19-2007, 12:08 AM
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Sorry, Alllie may have pretty low standards, but no amount of false flattery will get her to touch a mongoloid, in the heart or anywhere else.
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Sweet merciful crawdads, BT, how many 'L's' are you going to keep adding to Alie's name?
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Also, whatever did happen to that Dannyboy?
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Off with binoculars peeping in someone's window's somewhere perhaps?
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06-19-2007, 01:53 PM
Nice writing. I admit, I don't have a very keen sense when it comes to the finer arts. But I know what I like, and I like this!
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06-20-2007, 05:02 AM
I love your poem, Alie. You have a great talent for writing.
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06-20-2007, 06:52 AM
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Originally Posted by The Jabba Master
Well it was alot better then your vershon...
and also he died thats why the pipes are playing
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Rubbish. The pipes are calling the clan to war, and the son must go and the father (who's too old) stay behind. Neither the father or the son are dead at the time the song is written.
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06-20-2007, 10:40 AM
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Rubbish. The pipes are calling the clan to war, and the son must go and the father (who's too old) stay behind. Neither the father or the son are dead at the time the song is written.
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Its a simbolic song for death you git
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06-20-2007, 12:43 PM
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Its a simbolic song for death you git
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Don't call me a git, you fool, especially when you have no idea what you are talking about. The explanation that I gave is beyond dispute. There's no argument about it. The song is about a son who has to go off to war, and his father who may well be dead by the time the son returns.
Read the song, you simpering, drooling retard, and even you may be able to grasp it.
Failing that do some research before opening your ignorant mouth.
The usual interpretation is this:
In the very early days, in order to call an army together, the bagpiper went through the fields and valleys playing as he went. The young men fell in behind him and marched off to war. A father knowing his son was to march off to war wrote these lyrics for him.
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There are at least two versions of the story behind this song. Here is the first:
Once, a long time ago there was an old man who had raised many sons who he loved dearly. A war raged over the land that they lived in and one by one he saw each of them go off to fight and not return. Then one day, as harvest time drew near, he knew that his youngest, and most precious, son would soon be going off to fight just as his brothers before him. The old man was sad and knew that he may never see his last boy alive. He looked intently at the young lad, and with tears in his eyes he sang this song.
And here is the second:
The song is said to be based on a happening which occurred centuries ago when Ireland was divided into small serfdoms or kingdoms which warred among themselves. In those days a king would really lead his troops into war. According to the story, an old king lay dying when a battle was about to begin. He called his son Daniel to his bedside and explained that now, for the first time, the son must lead the army to battle. This song celebrates the words of the king to his son.
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Revelation 21:8 But the fearful, and unbelieving, and the abominable, and murderers, and whoremongers, and sorcerers, and idolaters, and all liars, shall have their part in the lake which burneth with fire and brimstone: which is the second death.
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06-20-2007, 12:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Enobarbus
Don't call me a git, you fool, especially when you have no idea what you are talking about. The explanation that I gave is beyond dispute. There's no argument about it. The song is about a son who has to go off to war, and his father who may well be dead by the time the son returns.
Read the song, you simpering, drooling retard, and even you may be able to grasp it.
Failing that do some research before opening your ignorant mouth.
The usual interpretation is this:
In the very early days, in order to call an army together, the bagpiper went through the fields and valleys playing as he went. The young men fell in behind him and marched off to war. A father knowing his son was to march off to war wrote these lyrics for him.
A web site says:
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Forget the websight What dose it say to your heart thats what matters
Jedi are the guardians of peace in the galaxy.
Jedi use their powers to defend and to protect.
Jedi respect all life, in any form.
Jedi serve others rather then ruling over them, for the good of the galaxy.
Jedi seek to improve themselves through knowledge and training.
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06-20-2007, 12:52 PM
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Its a simbolic song for death you git
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So Danny boy is dead is he?
Oh, Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling,
From glen to glen and down the mountain side;
The summer's gone, and all the leaves are falling;
'Tis ye, 'tis ye must go, and I must bide.
But come ye back when summer's in the meadow,
Or when the valley's hushed and white with snow;
'Til I'll be here in sunshine or in shadow;
Danny boy, Oh Danny boy, I love you so.
And when ye come and all the flowers are dying,
If I am dead, as dead I well may be.
Ye'll come and find the place where I am lying,
And kneel and say an "Ave" there for me.
And I shall hear, 'though soft ye tread around me,
And all my grave shall linger sweeter be,
Then ye will bend and tell me that ye love me,
And I shall sleep in peace until ye come to me.
You have a comprehension problem, you imbecile. Too much M'ing and smoking waccy baccy has addled your brain. Not that you ever had much of a brain to start with, it would seem. You need to find Jesus. Start reading the KJV1611 before it is too late, although I don't see how you are going to understand it. You are doomed to Hell fire with the other retards, I'm afraid.
Revelation 21:8 But the fearful, and unbelieving, and the abominable, and murderers, and whoremongers, and sorcerers, and idolaters, and all liars, shall have their part in the lake which burneth with fire and brimstone: which is the second death.
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06-20-2007, 01:01 PM
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Forget the websight What dose it say to your heart thats what matters
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My heart says that you are an inbred fool. That's what matters, right?
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06-20-2007, 01:07 PM
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Forget the websight What dose it say to your heart thats what matters
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It is a song of parting. And I'm not basing what I say simply on on the Website but on what is the only reasonable interpretation of the lyrics.
It's a song of parting, and the fact that the singer soon expects to die suggests that it is an older person -- a father or possibly a mother. But more likely a father.
With a change in lyrics it can be made into a man/woman love song, an is known as Eily Dear:
EILY DEAR
Oh, Eily dear, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountain side
The summer's gone, and all the roses falling
It's I, it's I must go, and you must bide.
But I'll come back when summer's in the meadow
Or when the valley's hushed and white with snow
And you'll be here in sunshine or in shadow
Oh Eily dear, oh Eily dear, I love you so.
Someday, may be, when all the flow'rs are dying
And I am dead, as dead I well may be
Ye'll come and find the place where I am lying
And kneel and say an Ave there for me.
And I shall hear, though soft you tread above me
And all my grave will warmer, sweeter, be
For you will bend and tell me that you love me
And I shall sleep in peace until you come to me.
This time it's being sung by a young man to his woman lover, so instead of "it's you, it's you must go...", the lyrics are "it's I, it's I must go...".
But however you look at it, and whichever version you prefer it is always a song of parting. A sad song about two people who are very close; but who must part and may never see each other again. This is what it says to both the heart and the brain.
"It's you, it's you must go, and I must bide" -- this is about two people who have to part. "Bide" means "stay", savvy?
Revelation 21:8 But the fearful, and unbelieving, and the abominable, and murderers, and whoremongers, and sorcerers, and idolaters, and all liars, shall have their part in the lake which burneth with fire and brimstone: which is the second death.
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06-20-2007, 02:06 PM
Actually there is only one set of Lyrics and but the song is sung wrong many times its supposed to be sung by a woman to a man or to a father to a Son and the Actual Lyrics go like so:
Oh Danny Boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountainside
The summer's gone, and all the leaves are falling
'Tis you, 'tis you must go and I must bide.
But come ye back when summer's in the meadow
Or when the valley's hushed and white with snow
For I'll be here in sunshine or in shadow.
Oh Danny Boy, oh Danny Boy, I love you so.
And when ye come, and all the flowers are dying
And I am dead, as dead I well may be
Ye'll come and find the place where I am lying
And kneel and say an Ave there for me.
And I shall hear, though soft you tread above me,
And o'er my grave shall warmer, sweeter be.
And if you bend and tell me that you love me.
Then I shall sleep in peace until you come to me.
Eather way the song is mostly played a Funerals and death is implyed in the song so Death is apart of this song for a great deal
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06-20-2007, 07:10 PM
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Sweet merciful crawdads, BT, how many 'L's' are you going to keep adding to Alie's name? Oh I imagine they'll keep adding until Kingdom Come.
Off with binoculars peeping in someone's window's somewhere perhaps?
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No no, Rachael, they're looking for Dannyboy, not Booby-Joe.
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Nice writing. I admit, I don't have a very keen sense when it comes to the finer arts. But I know what I like, and I like this!
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*Blushes* Thank you.
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I love your poem, Alie. You have a great talent for writing.
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*Blushes again* Thank you, too! I've been writing for a long time. I hardly ever like what I write, but I like this one. And that other one I posted here... Not the birthday one... The other one.
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Its a simbolic song for death you git
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Please don't insult Eno, it makes me very sad.
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It is a song of parting. And I'm not basing what I say simply on on the Website but on what is the only reasonable interpretation of the lyrics.
It's a song of parting, and the fact that the singer soon expects to die suggests that it is an older person -- a father or possibly a mother. But more likely a father.
I agree. I always see the image of a young lad of about 17 with a bag slung on his shoulder, walking away from his father, to answer the call of the pipes. And it always makes me teary.
But however you look at it, and whichever version you prefer it is always a song of parting. A sad song about two people who are very close; but who must part and may never see each other again. This is what it says to both the heart and the brain.
"It's you, it's you must go, and I must bide" -- this is about two people who have to part. "Bide" means "stay", savvy?
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Eno! You talk like my favourite pirate!! *Squeals and faints*
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06-20-2007, 07:14 PM
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Eno! You talk like my favourite pirate!! *Squeals and faints*
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My favorite pirate too! Although I also must admit that I'd buy a ticket to watch Geoffrey Rush read the phone book....
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06-20-2007, 07:21 PM
OMGs, I love Geoffry Rush! Hardcore! He's just great. He and Johnny Depp, man, I tell ya!
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10-22-2007, 08:14 PM
Ermmm.....
Is this a bona fide poetry forum ¿ This posting is pleasant enough-- somewhere between a journal entry and a country song. Notwithstanding that, it could use some serious tweaking. I'm parachuting in from poetry land. Poetry is my main addiction. If you'd like me to reconstruct your poem with minimal surgery, please let me know.
I believe that poetry stalks us everywhere, even in the kiss of hell.
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10-22-2007, 08:22 PM
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Ermmm.....
Is this a bona fide poetry forum ¿ This posting is pleasant enough-- somewhere between a journal entry and a country song. Notwithstanding that, it could use some serious tweaking. I'm parachuting in from poetry land. Poetry is my main addiction. If you'd like me to reconstruct your poem with minimal surgery, please let me know.
I believe that poetry stalks us everywhere, even in the kiss of hell.
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Hiya Bandit. Welcome to America. These people can't write poetry because they are Canuckistanis and have no taste. Especially Allie, who is a boob job without the boobs. Almost certifiable. The only good poetry in the world in in the KJV1611 (Authorized) Bible. The Song of Solomon. And it isn't really poetry.
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10-22-2007, 09:02 PM
Pastor Al, ouch! You've really hurt me! And I thought we were past the point of insults. This saddens me deeply.
And as for you, Mademoiselle Bandit, I'd prefer not to have my poems "tweaked" by perfect strangers, and I don't take kindly to the suggestion. So thank you, but no.
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10-22-2007, 09:09 PM
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Pastor Al, ouch! You've really hurt me! And I thought we were past the point of insults. This saddens me deeply.
And as for you, Mademoiselle Bandit, I'd prefer not to have my poems "tweaked" by perfect strangers, and I don't take kindly to the suggestion. So thank you, but no.
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Insult? Why Sweet Tart, that wasn't an insult. It was my heart speaking and that's what matters, right?
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