Dear Alie,
You understand of course, that these are poetry critical boards here,
and that's why you caught a bit of flak.
What can I add? Well, to the purpley poem itself: The "it's" in L1 of S2 refers to the dreamer's boat: the dream itself.
But that's not right. You might fix that easily enough.
There's pretty language and nice images throughout, albeit self-absorbed and inervating to the reader.
The finish is particularly sappy.
In summation: a cracking good poem because it is a testament of a soul damning itself to hell. As such, it is a warning, yes a warning for others to heed.
Thank you, and please, morrrre poetry! Poetry of your nature's kind elevates
we poetry critics.