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  • #1

    The pit of Rage

    Blinded by hatred.
    friendless and alone.
    Falling and hating.
    Into the pit of rage.
    But know this.
    Dont fall.
    Grab my hand.
    Dont be blinded.
    See the light.
    Dont go falling into the pit of rage.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Not my best ever...
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  • #2
    Re: The pit of Rage

    It sucks! Some REALLY BAD "poetry" right there - Pure emo crap.
    Please try posting something meaningful in the future:
    This forum isn't here to be a place for you to whine about the fact that nobody likes you.
    If thou be wise, thou shalt be wise for thyself: But if thou scornest, thou alone shalt bear it.
    A foolish woman is clamorous: She is simple, and knoweth nothing.
    Proverbs 9:12-13

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    • #3
      Re: The pit of Rage

      And he will love thee,
      and bless thee, and multiply thee:
      he will also bless the fruit of thy womb,
      and the fruit of thy land, thy corn,
      and thy wine, and thine oil,
      the increase of thy kine, and the flocks of thy sheep,
      in the land which he sware unto thy fathers to give thee.

      Thou shalt be blessed above all people:
      there shall not be male or female barren among you,
      or among your cattle.

      Deuteronomy 7:12-13

      Sister Talitha

      Markswoman, Circumcisionist, Platinum Tither.


      HE took the damsel by the hand, and said unto her, Talitha Cumi; which is,
      being interpreted, Damsel, I say unto thee, arise!...Mark 5:41


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      • #4
        Re: The pit of Rage

        -___-

        I'm not whining because nobody likes me, also, what is wrong with emo?

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        • #5
          Re: The pit of Rage

          And it isnt meaningful, it has meaning, jus beause you are too ignorant too see it doesn't mean you shoulf flame the writer.

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          • #6
            Re: The pit of Rage

            Originally posted by rikusorakairiown View Post
            And it isnt meaningful
            Correct. It (as in your "poetry") isn't.
            Now can you please stop whining for just a second?
            If thou be wise, thou shalt be wise for thyself: But if thou scornest, thou alone shalt bear it.
            A foolish woman is clamorous: She is simple, and knoweth nothing.
            Proverbs 9:12-13

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            • #7
              Re: The pit of Rage

              You totally ignored me

              It's all about having your Womb Blessed and being able to be a Baby Factory for Jesus.

              Sister Talitha

              Markswoman, Circumcisionist, Platinum Tither.


              HE took the damsel by the hand, and said unto her, Talitha Cumi; which is,
              being interpreted, Damsel, I say unto thee, arise!...Mark 5:41


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              • #8
                Re: The pit of Rage

                I didnt, I was trying to get my point over to salvation seeker.

                Which I seem not to have done very well...

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                • #9
                  Re: The pit of Rage

                  Originally posted by rikusorakairiown View Post
                  I didnt, I was trying to get my point over to salvation seeker.

                  Which I seem not to have done very well...
                  It was a little depressing. Are you always this miserable or does it go with the territory?

                  Sister Talitha

                  Markswoman, Circumcisionist, Platinum Tither.


                  HE took the damsel by the hand, and said unto her, Talitha Cumi; which is,
                  being interpreted, Damsel, I say unto thee, arise!...Mark 5:41


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                  • #10
                    Re: The pit of Rage

                    My poetry depends on how I'm feeling at the time.. Most of them are like this...

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                    • #11
                      Re: The pit of Rage

                      Nothing is wrong with emo poetry, except that it is boring as mud to everyone except the person who wrote it.

                      Really, it is. Trust me on this. Limericks are much better.

                      There once was a lover of Satan
                      Who wanted a partner for matin'.
                      But he cared not for Goths
                      Or bald 3-toed sloths...
                      And so the poor fellow's still waitin'.

                      So if you want a wife (or, in the case where you are female, a Godly husband) you had best RENOUNCE SATAN!

                      ~~ OEJ

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                      • #12
                        Re: The pit of Rage

                        I don't worship Satan.

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                        • #13
                          Re: The pit of Rage

                          Originally posted by rikusorakairiown View Post
                          I don't worship Satan.
                          Your signature says you're a satanist, your location says "hell", and you confessed to being a emo goth: You OBVIOUSLY worship satan.
                          So you can just stop lying now. Jesus hates liars.
                          If thou be wise, thou shalt be wise for thyself: But if thou scornest, thou alone shalt bear it.
                          A foolish woman is clamorous: She is simple, and knoweth nothing.
                          Proverbs 9:12-13

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                          • #14
                            Re: The pit of Rage

                            Satanism - The Landover Baptist Church Forum
                            http://www.landoverbaptist.net/showthread.php?t=6775
                            Catholics, Wiccans, Lutherans, Satanists, Mormons, and more!



                            kthxbai~

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                            • #15
                              Re: The pit of Rage

                              Few things in the world are worse than bad poetry.
                              Let Jesus Christ Wash You Clean
                              in 2016

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